Review Detail of Yukisen in Lust, Power, & Desire [R-18+]
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There is some NTR on the story and even if you debate that its not really that, when you read it feels like the MC is getting Cucked by just the way it was written. I am reviewing this to give you people a heads up about the NTR you might feel like it doesn't have it in your opinion, or you may agree with me, you can do what you want but I never would have read this if there were appropriate tags to be placed in. You can disagree saying that the MC is not being cucked, so there is no reason to put the tag in, but I am pretty sure with the way its written that it feels that the MC is being cucked, so just a warning, Next time I will read reviews before reading any story and waste time.
Lust, Power, & Desire [R-18+]
LordSputnik
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Once again... it isn't NTR... Lillica wasn't his wife, girlfriend, or even lover... and he wasn't forced to stay, curiosity can be a very strong motivator... but since so many people complain about chapter 4, I may do a quick rewrite of 4 and 5 so that Count Agist leaves the room before they start. (Seriously, I get more comments on that chapter than the rest of the novel combined)
Reading chapter 4 again didn't read 18 because I am not reading this book anymore as I will just move on to others so its cool you don't have to change it on my account. Anyway I read it, so the đȘ has a soul, A Soul, he can feel, he can have emotions and is not a "Toy" as you would call it, its like a spirit with a "Being" in it. It is not just toy play especially when the axe can "Roar" lol so you can't blame people that considered that the MC got cucked espically when he watched at first though before you changed it which still feels like nothing at all like "Toy play"... Anyway thats enough from me.
LordSputnik:Adjusted chapter 4 so that it is 100% not NTR since people were mistaking toy play as NTR. Adjusted chapter 18 so that Count Agist acknowledges what Lillica did in chapter 16. If this helps change your opinion of the story, please let me know.
Fair enough, I do admit after rewriting it that the ax roaring was a bit silly, I think I was feeling a need for some feedback from the ax. I consider it toy play since the ax wasn't 'awake' thus doesn't know what was happening. I hope you'll give it another chance in the future, but I understand if you don't want to. I don't make any money off of it so it is purely for fun that I write.
Yukisen:Reading chapter 4 again didn't read 18 because I am not reading this book anymore as I will just move on to others so its cool you don't have to change it on my account. Anyway I read it, so the đȘ has a soul, A Soul, he can feel, he can have emotions and is not a "Toy" as you would call it, its like a spirit with a "Being" in it. It is not just toy play especially when the axe can "Roar" lol so you can't blame people that considered that the MC got cucked espically when he watched at first though before you changed it which still feels like nothing at all like "Toy play"... Anyway thats enough from me.