The story and concept is intriguing. Sonnet has a very possessive character and it is cute to see that it is a girl who is jealous. It is relatable. Though there are some errors, the storyline is not hindered by them. I'd still suggest you to proofread it once. Overall, the story is cute and sweet. Keep up the good work author.
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