I only read one chapter, but the grammar and spelling errors were simply too much. An ‘I’ always has to be capitalized. Please don’t forget punctuation, and also learn the difference between to and too, in and inn, and other words that are phonetically identical.
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LIKEIt really sucks, not the story, I am interested in the story. Bad grammar can make it hard to read. I do not mind cliche as much though.
Raze_:Also "your" versus "you're" but yeah, I read one chapter and stopped, I cannot read this novel with its...severely lacking grammar (why is it that 80% of new novels seem overly cliche and/or have bad grammar)