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louis_nguyen
louis_nguyenLv14yr
2020-09-01 14:41

I love this story, but the grammar is absolutely atrocious. Until you fix your grammar, the rates are gonna remain low. I'm no guru of the english language myself, but my god is this terrible. I await your next chapter with hopefully a good amount of proper grammar

Lord of the Witches

Legendary_Person
4.4
52 Chs

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Legendary_Person
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Actually, the grammar isn't atrocious, the flow in which I wrote this is used in narrative speech, it's hard to correctly write the flow and is even harder to understand cause this type of writing is used for narrative, you need to have a high grammar level along with tolerance to read this kind of flow, it was a test novel so it doesn't really matter to me.

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