The storyline is interesting and keeps the readers attention. That's what writing novels are about - keeping readers attention to the end :) so you're doing very well.
I wish you more great ideas and inspiration!
I know this is shameless but I want to ask for your support for the last time. I joined WPC and badly needed votes. The title was "Amnesia Of Genius Copycat" Please if you have spare stones đ It was a Zombie novel by the way đ