Review Detail of Suriel8224 in Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God
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Dropped dropped dropped dropped .. But if you like mc that is just a pawn then go read this.. And he became a masochist in chapter 14 maybe or 13 . Dignity,pride? Mc doesn't need that lol.. He will even lick your feet if you teach him something.
Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God
GunnerRunner
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LoL he's not the mc so doesn't matter but the mc here is more weird . Assassin that tells people that he will kill them in their face. And the guy that teleport him there is just using him. Well what do you expect from a God name Loki The only useful devil fruit he have right now is the Phoenix that can heal him.
GunnerRunner:Did you just describe the person in your profile picture? Cause that seems like a pretty accurate describtion of Sasuke.
Honestly, I see your point. But that's just part of the story... Everyone has different tastes and likes, and this ff is just not to your liking. I made the story with the intention of getting 200~300 readers, but I got more than what I bargained for. Unfortunately, I can't please everyone and you happen to be one of those.
Suriel8224:LoL he's not the mc so doesn't matter but the mc here is more weird . Assassin that tells people that he will kill them in their face. And the guy that teleport him there is just using him. Well what do you expect from a God name Loki The only useful devil fruit he have right now is the Phoenix that can heal him.
Well I think it's my fault of expecting a fearless killer mc.but reality is cruel đ I just didn't expect him to became so edgy that even people is physically irritating him or not respecting him he is still okay with it. And the fight on that princess and him. I really want to punch his team Tanya I think. Bystanders questioning her. She speaks like she knows him very well .
GunnerRunner:Honestly, I see your point. But that's just part of the story... Everyone has different tastes and likes, and this ff is just not to your liking. I made the story with the intention of getting 200~300 readers, but I got more than what I bargained for. Unfortunately, I can't please everyone and you happen to be one of those.
I really wanted to end this on a good note, but you are making this hard for me, buddy. Whatever I will answer all of your arguments. (But if you like mc that is just a pawn then go read this..) Honestly, if you are a normal human and the other party is a God-like being, you will always be a pawn in his eyes... (And he became a masochist in chapter 14 maybe or 13) Do you actually know the definition of masochist? Here it is: a person who derives sexual gratification from their own pain or humiliation. Now, where have I actually stated that the MC was being aroused or turned on from being in pain? You are not even trying, buddy. (Dignity,pride? Mc doesn't need that lol.. He will even lick your feet if you teach him something.) Are you for real? Again, where have I stated such a thing? Are you really reading this or skimming through the story while making your own assumptions? (Assassin that tells people that he will kill them in their face.) This was supposed to show he is cocky and not right in the head, but I will give you this one. (And the guy that teleport him there is just using him. Well what do you expect from a God name Loki) As I said, when you are a normal human, a God-like entity could take advantage of you and you can't do anything about it. (Well I think it's my fault of expecting a fearless killer mc.but reality is cruel) Seriously? Are you really even trying? The MC couldn't kill someone leagues apart from him, so he is now a scaredy-cat?... (I just didn't expect him to became so edgy that even people is physically irritating him or not respecting him he is still okay with it.) Bro, you seriously are not even trying. Like what does physically irritating him even mean? And him being okay with people disrespecting him? Didn't he kill squash that guy to the floor for not moving out his way? (And the fight on that princess and him. I really want to punch his team Tanya I think. Bystanders questioning her.She speaks like she knows him very well .) Really? She has obviously seen him at his best and knew that what he was showing to them was the tip of the iceberg. What is she supposed to say? So all in all, you are either a troll, someone that's severely lacking in his comprehension of the English language, even compared to me, or you are skimming through the story without even reading it, and making your own assumptions. Pick your poison, buddy. Pick your poison.
Suriel8224:Well I think it's my fault of expecting a fearless killer mc.but reality is cruel đ I just didn't expect him to became so edgy that even people is physically irritating him or not respecting him he is still okay with it. And the fight on that princess and him. I really want to punch his team Tanya I think. Bystanders questioning her. She speaks like she knows him very well .
Don't be mad xD đ Well your right I skip some chapters because mc is sissy it's hard to tolerate reading so I'm waiting for the time where he is not a Coward or weak anymore. But the more chapter I read the more stupid the mc is Maybe the author too. If you want stupid and sissy mc why not just change mc past?. Rather than improving His personality is degrading to useless cuck. This is clearly what happens when your a stupid author but wannabe to write a novel with good character development. GOD LOKI BWAHAHAHAHHAHAHA. THATS JUST SHIT! HAHAHAHAHAHAHHA
GunnerRunner:I really wanted to end this on a good note, but you are making this hard for me, buddy. Whatever I will answer all of your arguments. (But if you like mc that is just a pawn then go read this..) Honestly, if you are a normal human and the other party is a God-like being, you will always be a pawn in his eyes... (And he became a masochist in chapter 14 maybe or 13) Do you actually know the definition of masochist? Here it is: a person who derives sexual gratification from their own pain or humiliation. Now, where have I actually stated that the MC was being aroused or turned on from being in pain? You are not even trying, buddy. (Dignity,pride? Mc doesn't need that lol.. He will even lick your feet if you teach him something.) Are you for real? Again, where have I stated such a thing? Are you really reading this or skimming through the story while making your own assumptions? (Assassin that tells people that he will kill them in their face.) This was supposed to show he is cocky and not right in the head, but I will give you this one. (And the guy that teleport him there is just using him. Well what do you expect from a God name Loki) As I said, when you are a normal human, a God-like entity could take advantage of you and you can't do anything about it. (Well I think it's my fault of expecting a fearless killer mc.but reality is cruel) Seriously? Are you really even trying? The MC couldn't kill someone leagues apart from him, so he is now a scaredy-cat?... (I just didn't expect him to became so edgy that even people is physically irritating him or not respecting him he is still okay with it.) Bro, you seriously are not even trying. Like what does physically irritating him even mean? And him being okay with people disrespecting him? Didn't he kill squash that guy to the floor for not moving out his way? (And the fight on that princess and him. I really want to punch his team Tanya I think. Bystanders questioning her.She speaks like she knows him very well .) Really? She has obviously seen him at his best and knew that what he was showing to them was the tip of the iceberg. What is she supposed to say? So all in all, you are either a troll, someone that's severely lacking in his comprehension of the English language, even compared to me, or you are skimming through the story without even reading it, and making your own assumptions. Pick your poison, buddy. Pick your poison.
Bro, you don't even have arguments to back yourself. Like, you are literally acting like a spoiled little brat. The more you talk, the more you embarrass yourself.
Suriel8224:Don't be mad xD đ Well your right I skip some chapters because mc is sissy it's hard to tolerate reading so I'm waiting for the time where he is not a Coward or weak anymore. But the more chapter I read the more stupid the mc is Maybe the author too. If you want stupid and sissy mc why not just change mc past?. Rather than improving His personality is degrading to useless cuck. This is clearly what happens when your a stupid author but wannabe to write a novel with good character development. GOD LOKI BWAHAHAHAHHAHAHA. THATS JUST SHIT! HAHAHAHAHAHAHHA
It is just me or yourjust the one who don't have arguments to back yourself? Your old man so.your mature I can't counter that đ
GunnerRunner:Bro, you don't even have arguments to back yourself. Like, you are literally acting like a spoiled little brat. The more you talk, the more you embarrass yourself.
I had literally responded to you with a wall of text, and your response was: your stupid hahahaha. How mentally challenged are you? Like I said, the more you talk, the more you embarrass yourself.
Suriel8224:It is just me or yourjust the one who don't have arguments to back yourself? Your old man so.your mature I can't counter that đ
When I read your fanfic all I can think is stupid and trash so don't blame me. That should be your fault for writing stupid fanfic bwahahhahahahahahađ. Your definition of intelligent is just not the same of US Normal humans. Btw I'm not saying your animal or some kind of living beings đ
GunnerRunner:I had literally responded to you with a wall of text, and your response was: your stupid hahahaha. How mentally challenged are you? Like I said, the more you talk, the more you embarrass yourself.
When I read your fanfic all I can think is stupid and trash so don't blame me. That should be your fault for writing stupid fanfic bwahahhahahahahahađ. Your definition of intelligent is just not the same of US Normal humans. Btw I'm not saying your animal or some kind of living beings đ
GunnerRunner:I had literally responded to you with a wall of text, and your response was: your stupid hahahaha. How mentally challenged are you? Like I said, the more you talk, the more you embarrass yourself.
Suriel8224:When I read your fanfic all I can think is stupid and trash so don't blame me. That should be your fault for writing stupid fanfic bwahahhahahahahahađ. Your definition of intelligent is just not the same of US Normal humans. Btw I'm not saying your animal or some kind of living beings đ
I'm not like you that likes to torture himself just because you didn't get a a dvk on your ass for a day hahaha
MilkGod:Why did you like your own comment?
Please learn basic Grammer, because I think I lost a couple of brain cells from reading your comment.
Suriel8224:I'm not like you that likes to torture himself just because you didn't get a a dvk on your ass for a day hahaha