Review Detail of Unchainedx in Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God
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A fantastic novel, until today I had only read one novel set in the TOG universe, this is the second, and I have to say: It is (so far) one of the original novel's that I liked the most, honestly I feel the author evolving, The first's chapters the author was very stuck with the original work, so we see repetitions of dialogs that could be avoided, but now I feel that he "get away" from the original sequence, and that was great, the writing took a tremendous leap. the MC is interesting, he's not a hero willing to sacrifice himself for other people, but he's not a bloodthirsty villain, he doesn't mind killing his enemies (which is very good), the powers are very interesting, and a Good point is that the author does not try to force other powers from the OP universe to the MC, is excellent as it is. One of the big problems when writing an original novel from an existing universe is that the authors make MC as a viewer, changes in the plot are minimal and the existence of MC is null. Here I feel that MC is important, that he is the true protagonist, the other characters know of his existence, and he is linked to the universe of TOG. The novel is going great, I had to do this review, don't drop this novel ... Never. One more thing: The novel is yours, the idea has come from you, the popularity is rising because you proved capable, I'm reading a lot of reader comments asking for: "changes" "he has to make ..." "make him do it ... "" give him this power ... "" Make it a Harem ... ", you can do that if that was your original idea or if you honestly think it will be good for the novel, the novel will not improve if you do what the fans ask. Keep up the wonderful work.
Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God
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Thanks a lot! Seeing something like this, means a lot to me. I'm not really good at expressing gratitude, since only thank you comes out of my mouth, but because of you I will try making a chapter today. I was planning on just sleeping and not do anything, but you inspired to write one, to say the least. I honestly didn't expect for this story to be liked by so many people... I wanted to write an original one, but it was a lot harder than expected. The fact, that I don't have any actual experience writing makes it even harder. Like, my whole writing experience comes from me reading novels, doing a bit of acting during my school days, and playing D&D... I started this with the intention of getting a better grasp on writing, and possibly getting 200~300 people that would enjoy my work, and possibly come over to my original when I finish this. Never would I though that there would be over 1 000 people reading something that I wrote.. Either way, thanks for feedback!
It's like I said, you have talent and you're getting it right where others went wrong, this novel has everything to work out and do much more reader's that they have, just take your time to get things done ^^. This is one of the only original novels / translated novels that I look forward to reading more. Keep up the excellent work.
GunnerRunner:Thanks a lot! Seeing something like this, means a lot to me. I'm not really good at expressing gratitude, since only thank you comes out of my mouth, but because of you I will try making a chapter today. I was planning on just sleeping and not do anything, but you inspired to write one, to say the least. I honestly didn't expect for this story to be liked by so many people... I wanted to write an original one, but it was a lot harder than expected. The fact, that I don't have any actual experience writing makes it even harder. Like, my whole writing experience comes from me reading novels, doing a bit of acting during my school days, and playing D&D... I started this with the intention of getting a better grasp on writing, and possibly getting 200~300 people that would enjoy my work, and possibly come over to my original when I finish this. Never would I though that there would be over 1 000 people reading something that I wrote.. Either way, thanks for feedback!
Unchainedx:Zushi Zushi no mi / Pika Pika no mi / Tori Tori no mi: Phoenix model
The name was: "Tower Of God: Leus", I stopped reading because it was bad, but now that you asked I went to take a look again and apparently the author rewrote it, the name is now: "Tower Of God: Blast", apparently still bad. You won't find a novel in the "TOG" universe as good as this one (I've already searched hard).
Hao123:Sabes donde puedo encontrar la primera historia que leíste de tog?
Well, another wet dream novel... I think that fiding a no-harem novel is this site is like fiding a unicorn in real life.
Unchainedx:Will be, the author warned that there will be 3-4 womens in the harem.
