1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this 8. You see the mistake right? (on7) 10. But did you see I skipped number 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9 13. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wandered why am I wasting my time on this. ( You got tricked ) Seriously though, it's very good.

A fantastic novel, until today I had only read one novel set in the TOG universe, this is the second, and I have to say: It is (so far) one of the original novel's that I liked the most, honestly I feel the author evolving, The first's chapters the author was very stuck with the original work, so we see repetitions of dialogs that could be avoided, but now I feel that he "get away" from the original sequence, and that was great, the writing took a tremendous leap. the MC is interesting, he's not a hero willing to sacrifice himself for other people, but he's not a bloodthirsty villain, he doesn't mind killing his enemies (which is very good), the powers are very interesting, and a Good point is that the author does not try to force other powers from the OP universe to the MC, is excellent as it is. One of the big problems when writing an original novel from an existing universe is that the authors make MC as a viewer, changes in the plot are minimal and the existence of MC is null. Here I feel that MC is important, that he is the true protagonist, the other characters know of his existence, and he is linked to the universe of TOG. The novel is going great, I had to do this review, don't drop this novel ... Never. One more thing: The novel is yours, the idea has come from you, the popularity is rising because you proved capable, I'm reading a lot of reader comments asking for: "changes" "he has to make ..." "make him do it ... "" give him this power ... "" Make it a Harem ... ", you can do that if that was your original idea or if you honestly think it will be good for the novel, the novel will not improve if you do what the fans ask. Keep up the wonderful work.

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This story is off to a beautiful start too often do I see mc’s with a good all around personality when we all know just how dark humanity truly is I’m genuinely excited to see which direction you take this Story but keep it classy and stay with the gore that **** is lovely 10/10

The author tried to portray the MC as cocky which just made him seem annoying, the typical nacissist guy. Moreover...top assassin at 17 yrs? Really :/ ? (Also, he doesnt behave like an assassin at all; more like someone with 8th grade syndrom) **Find an unknown attractive girl** "Will you go on a date with me if I win the bet? (while grinning ofc) :/ This is an assassin for you.. The start of how the story was introduced, with the thugs (chapter 1), was just horrible and cringe in my opinion; completely unnecessary and making the MC even more edgy. The story later also seems to go further into him becoming a trainer and a slice-of-life kind with action. If the MC was not so unlikable then it would be a lot better, but I cant bear to read with this f*cking annoying personality od his that makes me hate him even more every time. I hope that everytime that someone comes he will get beaten until near death to take away that annoying cockiness from him. If not for his character/personality it would be good. His character just take away all the other good parts of the novel making it unbearable.

Dropped dropped dropped dropped .. But if you like mc that is just a pawn then go read this.. And he became a masochist in chapter 14 maybe or 13 . Dignity,pride? Mc doesn't need that lol.. He will even lick your feet if you teach him something.

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Author this is really cool but just saying dont make the MC a good two shows but also not a bastard ok....Also make him a one man army I mean he already has really strong DF's so make him OP you..like easily stronger than all the cannon characters..maybe add some romance and fluff...and dont make the MC that requires teams or help but rather a one man army

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Its a tower of god fanfic and seems nice so far? So yeah... .................................................................................