Review Detail of WickedQueen2 in Sword Sovereign

Very good, although there are several grammar and punctuation mistakes, overall they aren't bad mistakes however as an author you should work to fix them. I loved the book so far and will be looking forward to more chapters in the future. One thing I must point out though as it isn't technically a mistake. I made a comment in the chapter but I saw you use the word infinitesimal, it is a nice word and I decided to look it up, however it didn't really fit with the rest of the sentence it was in. I hope you understand I'm not just giving you crap, I learned a new word after all, I just want to see how much better you can do. Thank you so much for writing this book and I hope you continue writing, preferably daily, just remember that a lot of people will like it as it gets larger.