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Azora_Angelina
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I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Although it isn't tagged with romance, I really felt the romantic atmosphere. I know this series is aready completed, but I wish I could read on more of what their life would have been like if they had to go through the heavenly wars or how doting of parents they might've become. Good job author! The attention to detail of the characters' personalities and thoughts were well thought out. With all the mature tags, I didn't expect the story would become really cute in the end. I loved it! I really see potential for mature romance novels!

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FlowingWaves
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It’s too bad i have no ideas for writing. I was thinking of maybe making a story about a Duke (since it’s so common), but hadn’t thought of any ideas besides that. Feel free to share if you have any.

Azora_Angelina
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Really?! Well, I admire your writing style! It's just a dream of mine, but what if you wrote a continuation of Zephyr and Mary, but the main lead is their daughter. Mary wants to raise her to have morals like a human and Zephyr becomes a doting parent who shelters her from other demons. One day she wins a little bet in a game against Zephyr and is able to attend the human schools with an exception if she takes a protective pendant against angels and demons and other beasts alike since she isn't a full demon. It also gives her the life source she needs since she has had difficulty in obtaining it. She was never once successfully able to do it before, so she was a virgin demon. I think this part would be interesting. Her childhood 'friend' demon follows her to Earth out of boredom and shows her what humans do. Some sort of magic allows her to be seen on earth so she can attend school for about a year and she has a crush on a boy who later turns out to be an angel. And maybe there could be some sort of beginning of another war between the angels and demons and the love triangle between the daughter, her childhood demon friend, and the angel. The angel struggles from continuing his loyal duties and becoming a Fallen. Seeing that the daughter is of highly bred blood, she is a target. I don't know, I just really loved your story and came up with this on a whim! If I were to ship her with anyone, I'd choose her demon childhood friend! How did he meet her? He was a lone young demon and she had wandered a little too far from home because she was bored of being stuck at home. She never met any other demons than the ones at home or the ones who entered to meet her father. Why would he fall for her? Because he was intrigued about the complexity of human morals. In other words, he was an 'abnormal at an early age and thought morals to be amusing. "What are you doing out here in the middle of nowhere?!"- Zephyr "I went to make friends!" she pouted. "Demons don't need friends!"-Zephyr "But you became Mama's very first friend! Are you saying you don't need her?!!" she yelled at her father," Besides... look I did make a friend!" Zephyr is overprotective of his daughter and threatens to end his life, but she scolds him," If you won't let me see him or if you ever do anything to him, I won't ever like you anymore, Papa!" The demon was amused how the lesser demon controlled THE Zephyr and continued to play along with this child as she grew up. I really think this would be cute! If you ever write this story, could I turn it into a webcomic?! Or even if you don't, could I? Well, this is my fantasy. I hope you'll consider it!

Azora_Angelina
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**. She teaches him what her mom teaches her about human life. This is what made him interested in studying humans since his devilish side loved to learn what tortured them most. Demons were too simple for him to excite his gory humor. During their stay on Earth, he meets a human girl who is interested in him and finds out his true nature, begging him to be hers, offering her soul to him. Well, I'll stop here, I think I wrote too much. 😅 If there were other suggestions I would make if you were to write a story of a duke, he could make a contract with a demon to work in his favor. Whether it is to conquer a king, or fulfill revenge, or pursue a lady.

FlowingWaves
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I just realised Zephyr is technically that. Thank you for the input. Your comment serves great inspiration for me. I’m going to try continuing this story tomorrow.

Azora_Angelina:**. She teaches him what her mom teaches her about human life. This is what made him interested in studying humans since his devilish side loved to learn what tortured them most. Demons were too simple for him to excite his gory humor. During their stay on Earth, he meets a human girl who is interested in him and finds out his true nature, begging him to be hers, offering her soul to him. Well, I'll stop here, I think I wrote too much. 😅 If there were other suggestions I would make if you were to write a story of a duke, he could make a contract with a demon to work in his favor. Whether it is to conquer a king, or fulfill revenge, or pursue a lady.
Azora_Angelina
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I can't wait to see the results! I have faith in your works!