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Review Detail of Atomic_Keith in Urasaria Academy

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A really good story overall, decent length chapters, good characters, lgbtq+ support, interesting world, ect. One of the only issues I can find is that when the author lists multiple characters they go CharacterA+CharacterB+CharacterC+CharacterD and CharacterE. This is improper grammer, it should instead be listed like CharacterA, CharacterC, CharacterD, and CharacterE. This also helps being able to read who the characters are, because when they are all connected by the plus's, it makes it look like 1 word and very hard to read.

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