I dont know how this got into the top and i dont really want to know.....i also dont know how people can give this a 5 star......i mean im sorry to the author who will probably read this.....but this is honestly what i feel about your story.....it's disgusting........plot armors are used so d*mn often because there's that many f*king plot holes....i mean...seriously? I wasnt even finished with chapter 1 and i already wanted to drop it....i only reached till chapter 5.... Then tried looking somewhere in chapter 30+ to see if your writing has changed........no....nothings changed you answer plot holes by using plot armor and brute force, no explainations whatsoever......i mean sure everyone uses plot holes and plot armors....but in almost every event(ive seen so far). Like come on.........i seriously dont know how you got that high of a rating in this novel of yours......i didnt expect much when i saw a few reviews from other people but i dont usually believe them and read it myself to see if its actually a novel worth reading and this wasnt.......worth it.
Imbreak
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LIKELiterally tells everyone his life story like he’s from a diff world and they’re a story in the mind of someone else
shubh_gupta:That's all well and good, but how does your review help anyone coming to check whether to pick up this fanfic? You say it's full of plot holes repeatedly but you could have at least given one example......