Review Detail of FvkYouBoy in Ultimate Fruit
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It's good to read but my only problem is the mc.. It makes me really annoyed. Author keeps making mc mentions that he is from another world that it turns off people from continuing this. And it's funny that this mc keeps using his power then faint. Giving him power is really just a waste he is more suited on becoming a messenger or just a civilian.
Ultimate Fruit
Imbreak
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I'm sorry you weren't satified with my story but I will still stick to the MC telling the strawhats that he is from another world. Anyway, he will only tell the strawhats since he knew their characters, he won't go around telling it to others. And about his power, he only faints if he uses it excessively, otherwise, he can just flood islands at will and it would be too OP. There is also another reason to it that will be told in the future...if you stick around that is.
Ehem luffy won't go around telling people? Are you sure about that unless you change their character so yep luffy will tell them in accident
Imbreak:I'm sorry you weren't satified with my story but I will still stick to the MC telling the strawhats that he is from another world. Anyway, he will only tell the strawhats since he knew their characters, he won't go around telling it to others. And about his power, he only faints if he uses it excessively, otherwise, he can just flood islands at will and it would be too OP. There is also another reason to it that will be told in the future...if you stick around that is.
TheTrueGilgamesh:Ehem luffy won't go around telling people? Are you sure about that unless you change their character so yep luffy will tell them in accident
Wahhha i just said my opinion and now i'm gay wow that"s magical you mother must be a very goooooood CUMSLUT to form a special kind of b*tch like you, your the result of thousand different cum fermented inside your cumslut of a motherđđ
FvkYouBoy:Luffy is honest not like you so shut up gay**** đđ
Imbreak:I'm sorry you weren't satified with my story but I will still stick to the MC telling the strawhats that he is from another world. Anyway, he will only tell the strawhats since he knew their characters, he won't go around telling it to others. And about his power, he only faints if he uses it excessively, otherwise, he can just flood islands at will and it would be too OP. There is also another reason to it that will be told in the future...if you stick around that is.
TheTrueGilgamesh:Wahhha i just said my opinion and now i'm gay wow that"s magical you mother must be a very goooooood CUMSLUT to form a special kind of b*tch like you, your the result of thousand different cum fermented inside your cumslut of a motherđđ
TheTrueGilgamesh:Wahhha i just said my opinion and now i'm gay wow that"s magical you mother must be a very goooooood CUMSLUT to form a special kind of b*tch like you, your the result of thousand different cum fermented inside your cumslut of a motherđđ
Xen_120598:I also don't like mc like that actually. đ¤ Why? Well, I'll also ask you the same. Why? just why do he need to say that he's from another world? Just why? Why? Why? đ¤ˇââ
Ultimate_Ciel:i just stop everything i am doing and ponder why humans are so mean towards each other and are so fucking toxic
TheTrueGilgamesh:Ehem luffy won't go around telling people? Are you sure about that unless you change their character so yep luffy will tell them in accident
among all the people you could have told your secret , you just have to tell Luffy. He will just announce it to the entire world by accident. That was pretty foolish thing to do.
Imbreak:I'm sorry you weren't satified with my story but I will still stick to the MC telling the strawhats that he is from another world. Anyway, he will only tell the strawhats since he knew their characters, he won't go around telling it to others. And about his power, he only faints if he uses it excessively, otherwise, he can just flood islands at will and it would be too OP. There is also another reason to it that will be told in the future...if you stick around that is.