Review Detail of DaoistyQNGiX in Reincarnate as Batman in Marvel
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Awful. The author for some reason is making the mc an idiot with average grades lol makes no sense unless he is a complete idiot for a reincarnator... dad asks about his average grades so the mc replies about wanting to do martial arts...... dumb mc dont bother since its supposed to be batman but he’s an idiot
Reincarnate as Batman in Marvel
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The part that his grades are average so his dad asks him what he wants or the part that he actually has average grades..... first one would make sense if he had great grades or if the dialogue had more detail and didnt jump right into martial arts without a real reason..... second one just doesnt make sense for him to get average grades since “laying low” makes no sense
Herokiller_7575:What are you talking about? It all makes sense
First I rewrote some things in chapter 3 and the second I also wrote a reason in chapter 3. i did all of this when i saw your comment in chapter 3.
DaoistyQNGiX:The part that his grades are average so his dad asks him what he wants or the part that he actually has average grades..... first one would make sense if he had great grades or if the dialogue had more detail and didnt jump right into martial arts without a real reason..... second one just doesnt make sense for him to get average grades since “laying low” makes no sense
