Review Detail of glaurunglives in The Day You Conquered the World

Hi, Author here with a shameless review — just to push it to 10. The novel is written in 2nd person — meaning "you" are the MC. It might seem jarring or enjoyable — but it's not a gimmick. I've mapped my chapters up to 300 — but the story has a life of its own. I'll consider any suggestions readers have on where they want to take the story — as long as it isn't too fantastic or deviate from the overall plot. Thanks for reading!