Review Detail of tabithafrance in The Day You Conquered the World

Great story! Starts a bit slow but gets faster once he (you?) joins a party. Someone said D&D, I think its more warhammer RPG (the fantasy one) but with a 40K primarch. For one, he uses a Thunderhammer and he hates spellcasters! Torm the smith has a friggin Stormshield! Before chapter 30, he's already planning to implant organs and the troops will probably have the same genetic defect as the Space Wolves. The story has its light moments, grim moments, and graphically cruel moments. The MC which is you, tends to be a little cold and kinda sadistic? I'm not sure but I like it. It's a mature read and could use some polishing at times but definitely up there when it comes to grammar and spelling.