Review Detail of Cath_Nispin in The Day You Conquered the World

well this one is a straightforward fantasy that reminds me of a d&d table. i like it. characters slowly develop and the story seems interesting. 2 chapters a day seems good but don't burn yourself out author! the writing style can be jarring at first but i got used to it. the author takes the time to review his work or he has an editor because spellings and grammar are close to flawless. the character (pc?) names are too varied (lotr, medieval, biblical, modern). you have trent, eomer, dune, caleb, thomas, and a bruce in one party? did you just take pc names and use them in your novel? but i like the inn's name! alice and the hungry cat! i'm enjoying your novel. i hope you keep writing!