Honest Review Not sure if I love this one or hate it honestly. Mixed feelings? The Good: The setting feels both realistic and fantastical at the same time which is honestly hard to pull off. Using the 2nd person does create good immersion. The grammar has been excellent! The Bad: I think I've read the word "You" more times in the 18 chapters of this book than every other book combined. 2nd person creates good immersion, but it doesn't create an identity for us without the author filling in some information. The Neutral: I personally would rather have it stuck to 3rd person, or possibly 1st, but I also understand part of the draw is the 2nd person POV and letting the readers imagine the MC as themselves.
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