Review Detail of PassingWriter in The Day You Conquered the World

I don't write reviews that much but this my early review on this. I'll change this in the future if it calls for the need. Anyways, the Grammar is really good compared to the other stories here on Webnovel. Hell, I'm even surprised by it's quality. World Background is pretty interesting in my opinion and about the Story Development there isn't much I can say as there isn't a lot of chapters. But overall, this novel is pretty good. It's something that could develop to a pretty successful story.