Review Detail of CalciumLurcher in GOD IN ANIMEVERSE

Writing quality: broken english, getting an editor would fix this. stability of updates: good updating history Story development: kinda mainstream with the "reincarnated and is now op" Character design: not very good, the characters lack the sense of real people, the characters need to act more realistic World background: start was good but then it just became like the rest of the ff's out there. i enjoy it, but there are just some parts that i cringe at reading because nobody would act like that. to make the book better make it more realistic and explain more why things happen and give more details and be more specific when describing things. Take your time describing and/or explaining things, you don't have a time limit and it will make the book more immersive.