Review Detail of Tibbles in Supreme Lord Shapeshifter

I want to start by saying that this is purely criticism from a objective perspective and in no way should be taken personally by the author. With that said the grammar and writing quality is abysmal and needs more work than I could believe possible for a novel with so many chapters and power stones. While the story and world are fine the grammar and English level I think are beyond savaging but I hope that I am proven wrong in the future by a whole team of editors.