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Review Detail of XystOblivion in Supreme Lord Shapeshifter

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XystOblivion
XystOblivionLv123yrXystOblivion

Writing quality is pretty disappointing. The premise is interesting and I believe that this novel certainly could be good. It’s just I can’t deal with the amount of mistakes and choppy sentence structure. I understand that your first language probably isn’t English and as such I’m still giving you a decent review. People obviously like your work so keep at it. :)

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Supreme Lord Shapeshifter

Krizantem

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Krizantem
KrizantemAuthorKrizantem

Not everyone had the chance of being a native :) By the way I read your book you should continue to write.Thank you

XystOblivion
XystOblivionLv12XystOblivion

Oh that’s neat, thanks for reading!

Krizantem:Not everyone had the chance of being a native :) By the way I read your book you should continue to write.Thank you
Daoist_Rubeno
Daoist_RubenoLv11Daoist_Rubeno

Being native is not an excuse. Just work on your ability to use english. It's not that hard in the end.

Krizantem:Not everyone had the chance of being a native :) By the way I read your book you should continue to write.Thank you
Grundy535
Grundy535Lv15Grundy535

Yeah I’ve got to agree on the whole English thing. At the very least please look over the intro. Has some errors that don’t exactly give off the best impression.

Zanzabar
ZanzabarLv14Zanzabar

My man english is one of the hardest languages in the world to learn. There is so much nuisance and implied meaning that isn’t discussed that we as native speakers don’t even think about, but that doesn’t diminish it’s difficulty...either way keep at it and you’ll get better with time!

LevelHeaded_Guy33
LevelHeaded_Guy33Lv4LevelHeaded_Guy33

It does have something to do with because it is harder for some people that grew up in different parts of the world to be able to actually write good because they probably write in a different way where they live then here

Daoist_Rubeno:Being native is not an excuse. Just work on your ability to use english. It's not that hard in the end.
ZedukelStarstryker
ZedukelStarstrykerLv12ZedukelStarstryker

I know a french author and an italian author that is better than more than 99% of authors on here....

LevelHeaded_Guy33:It does have something to do with because it is harder for some people that grew up in different parts of the world to be able to actually write good because they probably write in a different way where they live then here
Hati_3317
Hati_3317Lv4Hati_3317

I don't think you understand the point. The point is that being bad at english/english not being your first language etc shouldnt be a "freebie" to give a higher rating to a story just because.

LevelHeaded_Guy33:It does have something to do with because it is harder for some people that grew up in different parts of the world to be able to actually write good because they probably write in a different way where they live then here
Supremeorb
SupremeorbLv11Supremeorb

if the reviewer feels like it is then it is, if he doesn't then it doesn't, you're fighting a pointless battle in someone else's review.

Hati_3317:I don't think you understand the point. The point is that being bad at english/english not being your first language etc shouldnt be a "freebie" to give a higher rating to a story just because.
cruzzy
cruzzyLv1cruzzy

Zanzabar:My man english is one of the hardest languages in the world to learn. There is so much nuisance and implied meaning that isn’t discussed that we as native speakers don’t even think about, but that doesn’t diminish it’s difficulty...either way keep at it and you’ll get better with time!
Zanzabar
ZanzabarLv14Zanzabar

Explan

cruzzy:
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Zanzabar
ZanzabarLv14Zanzabar

Explain*

cruzzy:
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cruzzy
cruzzyLv1cruzzy

You said that english is one of the hardest languages in the world which obviously isn't true lmao

Zanzabar:Explain*
Zanzabar
ZanzabarLv14Zanzabar

Yes it is you imbecile😂 literally just look it up. english is overly complicated for absolutely no reason.

cruzzy:You said that english is one of the hardest languages in the world which obviously isn't true lmao
cruzzy
cruzzyLv1cruzzy

You clearly have no idea what you are talking about lmao Also saying stuff like Imbecile isn't going to make you look smarter buddy

Zanzabar:Yes it is you imbecile😂 literally just look it up. english is overly complicated for absolutely no reason.
Niche267
Niche267Lv3Niche267

Maybe not, but atleast proofread. So many authors on here don't even bother. Even on this response, you didn't put a space after write.

Krizantem:Not everyone had the chance of being a native :) By the way I read your book you should continue to write.Thank you