wOw. ..really a very good story . . very interesting .even though am not fond of this type of stories but this story hooked me up. really I loved it.. ..thank author for such a great story .... . . A little suggestion . using nouns would be better than using pronounce .because of using pronounce like(he said ,she said ,I listen )it's little bit confusing .because of that I had to read twice to understand it. instead of them using name will be great .a little suggestion from a reader . . . according to its just awesome ....more than awesome ...very very interesting story ..... KEEP WRITING MORE. ...dear author ...[img=recommend] đđâ¤â¤â¤â¤â¤
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