Review Detail of Hasu_Yodd in Reborn in DxD with OP Barrier and Enhancement Magic
Review detail
The worst characters in this novel is not a villain like riser but the main character he fucks up entire plot line then for stability of an non existent plot he doesn't let kuroka meet his sister kiba his friends and forces akeno his GF to be slave of rias. Despite of being an OP character his is a sissy who always hides. The harem is too forcefull and author clearly lack and creative brain power.
Reborn in DxD with OP Barrier and Enhancement Magic
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Yo, I don’t know if you read the whole thing or not but the mc (author) does explain why he does those thing- which is to predict the future which will help him create his harem. The author also wants keep the plot-line the same because he is fucking new a author and you can’t just fucking expect every fucking new author to out of nowhere create this fucking amazing work of art suited for you and it also clearly stated that the whole fanfic is about mc creating a harem, nothing else. Also Akeno being Rias’s slave is overkill as the mc can remove the devil piece at anytime. Thx for reading this poor persons ranting :) .
You know even if the new author **** up whole story it does not matter but if he just stuck up with the original plot line it is just plagiat and the novel is waste of author and readers time.
BLANCK:Yo, I don’t know if you read the whole thing or not but the mc (author) does explain why he does those thing- which is to predict the future which will help him create his harem. The author also wants keep the plot-line the same because he is fucking new a author and you can’t just fucking expect every fucking new author to out of nowhere create this fucking amazing work of art suited for you and it also clearly stated that the whole fanfic is about mc creating a harem, nothing else. Also Akeno being Rias’s slave is overkill as the mc can remove the devil piece at anytime. Thx for reading this poor persons ranting :) .
Dude listen if a author doesn’t follow the plot line and messes the story the readers pissed and if the author goes own with the plot even if the story is good the readers be like ”man it’s getting boring, I already know the story and the author doesn’t change anything it’s like I’m just watching the same old same”. The point is that no novel can make everyone like it. I may like something you don’t and vice versa.
Angelxcx:You know even if the new author **** up whole story it does not matter but if he just stuck up with the original plot line it is just plagiat and the novel is waste of author and readers time.
Well I looking on that like this if you write some thesis in school and copy paste 80-90% of someone work you will get F and perhaps get kick of scholl. But if your work get inspired of someone work and copy 30-40% and say where you get the information you will get worse grade than someone who have super thesis but still pass. I can understood that readers have different tastes but in that case authors should specify what will they write like "copy paste of the plot line, "Harem" etc. than nobody can complain. Most authors do not even know what they want to write or just say read it and you will know but than the spectrum of readers who do not like this tags complain and write they opinion and authors cry how mean they are
BLANCK:Dude listen if a author doesn’t follow the plot line and messes the story the readers pissed and if the author goes own with the plot even if the story is good the readers be like ”man it’s getting boring, I already know the story and the author doesn’t change anything it’s like I’m just watching the same old same”. The point is that no novel can make everyone like it. I may like something you don’t and vice versa.
I get where coming from and I agree with you there. I originally replied to this review just because of this “then for stability of an non existent plot he doesn’t let kuroka meet his sister”. WFT. I mean does ((he/she- gender equality)) expect kuroka a SSS class stray devil to just pop up out of nowhere and say - ”yo I’m innocent. I only killed that guy because he tried to harm you and not because I’m power hungry” first of all kuroka would need evidence and even if she does how do you think the underworld would react to that- the disbandment or the destruction of the household that did the experiment because it was illegal(I think and I’m pretty sure that the household that did the experiment was of 72 noble household or something.)
Angelxcx:Well I looking on that like this if you write some thesis in school and copy paste 80-90% of someone work you will get F and perhaps get kick of scholl. But if your work get inspired of someone work and copy 30-40% and say where you get the information you will get worse grade than someone who have super thesis but still pass. I can understood that readers have different tastes but in that case authors should specify what will they write like "copy paste of the plot line, "Harem" etc. than nobody can complain. Most authors do not even know what they want to write or just say read it and you will know but than the spectrum of readers who do not like this tags complain and write they opinion and authors cry how mean they are
Damn it you surely unreasonable beyond believe. What this review said isn't non existent either therefor it acceptable.
BLANCK:Yo, I don’t know if you read the whole thing or not but the mc (author) does explain why he does those thing- which is to predict the future which will help him create his harem. The author also wants keep the plot-line the same because he is fucking new a author and you can’t just fucking expect every fucking new author to out of nowhere create this fucking amazing work of art suited for you and it also clearly stated that the whole fanfic is about mc creating a harem, nothing else. Also Akeno being Rias’s slave is overkill as the mc can remove the devil piece at anytime. Thx for reading this poor persons ranting :) .
Hahahaha that's what happen to my story! I didn't change the plotline of my story and they commented just what you said. I also tried to change the plotline and they also said the I **** up the plotline. Hahahaha how funny it is?
BLANCK:Dude listen if a author doesn’t follow the plot line and messes the story the readers pissed and if the author goes own with the plot even if the story is good the readers be like ”man it’s getting boring, I already know the story and the author doesn’t change anything it’s like I’m just watching the same old same”. The point is that no novel can make everyone like it. I may like something you don’t and vice versa.
Yo check out my fanfic.I too fucjed the main plot in the ass. There was one who was blabbering **** but people really like my story
RuinKing0899:Hahahaha that's what happen to my story! I didn't change the plotline of my story and they commented just what you said. I also tried to change the plotline and they also said the I **** up the plotline. Hahahaha how funny it is?
Erin_beast:Hey I’m sorry if you Stupid fucks have nothing better to read or maybe he just tried his best but it doesn’t mean that you can dodge him to go **** yourselves
State in the synopsis that you are merely using the world but not following plot or at best loosely following it. Anyone that complains after that is a moron and you should ignore them.
RuinKing0899:Hahahaha that's what happen to my story! I didn't change the plotline of my story and they commented just what you said. I also tried to change the plotline and they also said the I **** up the plotline. Hahahaha how funny it is?
RuinKing0899:Hahahaha that's what happen to my story! I didn't change the plotline of my story and they commented just what you said. I also tried to change the plotline and they also said the I **** up the plotline. Hahahaha how funny it is?