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Review Detail of Arkael in Let Me Game in Peace

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Arkael
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Written in your average Chinesse web novel style. This novel may or may not be to your liking. Here is why: -Translation wise, i cannot say much but a few wrong words here and there because i don't read the original in Chinesse to make a fair comparison. -Story wise it is quite similar to 'Shadow Hack'. A glaring flaw exist unfortunately in the form of a lack of description of how the MC uses the mysterius phone itself. The author write it in such a way as tough the female character were more detailed than the description of how the MC uses the phone. -Character wise, it is suprisingly well done. The MC was not as apathetic as what other reviewers write. He did capable of feeling emotions like exhilaration, delight, and capable of being suprised and alarmed. The side character have a reason for what they feel and think if you put yourself on their place despite what almost everyone on the comments said. -World building wise, not much was known as of the last chapter i read to say for certain about the bigger picture. What annoyed most of the reader however was how the author can easily changed what was previously explained. Example was that the MC can only use Divine Vigor Technique for one time in short period because the technique used 5 essence energy while MC only has 9 max. Yet at the fight against the Skeleton General, the MC was described to use the technique several times in short period.

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Let Me Game in Peace

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Yirikalische
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Your first point is explained later on.