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Pavan1234
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Excellently written Naruto fanfic. (only problem for me, as I read many novels with Mc having sharingan, is this type of death-of-loved-ones plot to get mangekeyo sharingan for Mc is overused become clichéd to an extent for me to most of the time avoid Naruto fanfics with Mc having sharingan) Highlights of this fanfic are Mc's characterization and some excellent character interactions in initial 20 to 30 chapters. Plot premise is above average. Plot progression is good and well paced. Hope author completes this novel. I think sharingan as an ability isn't worth any thing special as this ability comes several mental problems(always permanently remember any incident good or bad) and physical problems(loss of eye sight and Chakra exhaustion)

The Sharingan Hyuga

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KingWhite
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"I thought your opinion was quite complete, although I didn't read it. I was glad for the simple fact that you indicated the positive and negative points of fanfic, thanks and keep giving constructive opinions, helping the authors and also the readers. " - King White

FAP_Master_
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Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem

DearCompanion
DearCompanionLv4DearCompanion

☆ special new year's giveaway ☆ I know how frustated it was for you to find something decent to read. Therefore, we come up with a list of pretty good if not better than 95% trash novel litterred everywhere. You can download it here -> bit .ly/haremnovel for free. It's based on our years of experience tasting different novels. I remember that i have unfortunately found something where there's a certain MC who're up to now hasn't killed any one I mean every time he fights someone they run away and he is stronger than them practically all the time. They always come back but he never kills them he says he's going to but he never does. Its been the same people trying to kill him over and over again and the list just keeps getting bigger but he still doesn't kill them. He lets them walk away then when they attack him again he says I will kill you but then just lets them leave. I'm not even kidding he literally lets them walk away and says do not chase after them just let them go? They don't even use treasures to get away they just walk away snort and say I will kill you next time. That type of MC is cringe a.f. Obviously we will not include that type of MC to our list. What are you waiting for? Just go -> bit. ly/haremnovel . Or Do you still want to read something that made your beastmode on There's a fanfic where Meh. Mc can't cultivate what will he do there sightseeing? 🤔 I'm sure this will be like the original that Mc is always getting underestimated then Mc will prove them that they are all wrong!! 👎😅 and author actually says that Mc is not OP!! ****ing hell the original Mc is SO OP but you ****ing say you won't make him op???Seriously? Looks like this author is masochist that likes useless Mc that always gets push around but always getting saved by his cheats or plot armors If I'm only there on your side I already strangle you to death and then let you eat horse p*ss, horse sh*ts ,dog sh*ts and every sh*ts in the world then I will just flush your body on your toilet That type of thing. Haha, anyway we will continue our research so good luck.

Ove1230
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Garbage

as1804
as1804Lv12as1804

Is this harem???

Pavan1234
Pavan1234Lv5Pavan1234

No

as1804:Is this harem???
fsdf_adsfsd
fsdf_adsfsdLv11fsdf_adsfsd

Not really,

as1804:Is this harem???
hydrocyanic_acid
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Good good

Pavan1234:No
Sugar_God
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is the mc dumb? .

MurderMoon
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The chakra exhaustion thing is a bit unfair That’s only a problem if you don’t have uchiha dna as evidenced by Itachi keeping his on 24/7