Review Detail of BlackCarapace in Where Secrets Lie

Item: Where Secrets Lie
Rating: 4.4

Review detail

BlackCarapaceLv54yrBlackCarapace

I think, the way you writing is too formal. Make sure your reader is reading novel. Some paragraph is too long. Cut it into pieces. You need more cliche in first three chapter that can make your reader heart beat faster.

Where Secrets Lie

Ebony_Kent

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BlackCarapaceLv5BlackCarapace

And dont publish your chapter too fast. Make sure you raise your views first

4yr

Ebony_KentAuthorEbony_Kent

Thanks for the suggestions!

4yr