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2020-04-13 14:49

Full of repeated plot lines. I don’t care which book came first or second. But I see that there are shït tonne of repeated plot lines. What do u expect a immortal cultivator who has immortal body to do in modern world? Even if they self imposed to not steal or resort to criminal activities, there are lot of ways. But, it’s China, so strut ur stuff in front of old acquaintance or exes, go to the antique shop, have something to do with makeup, oh and find a rich family to cure them of something....I bet there will be stone gambling too. Things I like: MC is not a teenager or young adult that looses his shít next second a 2D side character comes. And love the daughter character. Author did a good job of padding with words.

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well, what do you expect from a racist, brainwashed people who are prohibited from watching western shows because it might affect their loyalty??? their only dream is to be number one in the world.!

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