Review Detail of JenniferG in Ceo's Fierce Lady Immortal

New concept ion immortal story. At least for me. I like it so far. But what bothers me terribly is the fact that there is no one looking after the transition quality. As usual, this is a binary based gender story, even so, shes are called he, hes are called she. It lacks commas. It is hard to read sometimes. I hope this to be solved by the locked chapters.