Review Detail of LostInFictions in Ceo's Fierce Lady Immortal

This is pretty interesting. I really enjoyed reading the first ten chapters. I might come back, delete this review and write another one when I read more. There are some grammatical errors which I know you are aware of. Take care of the punctuation. You constantly switch between the present and the past tense. That made the read a bit complicated. Please stick to one. Choose if you want to tell your story in the present or the past and then accordingly go ahead. I think this story would do great if you take care of these minor issues. Good luck.