Review Detail of Elude in Ceo's Fierce Lady Immortal

So far, the story is coming out nicely, and I'm enjoying it. (I've always been a fan of fantasy + romance genre, so maybe I'm a little biased.) Overall, I admire the personality of the MC, and I'm looking forward to reading more. I have a problem, however. Truthfully, the grammar pulls the story down. (There are some basic grammar problems which can be adjusted with more writing experience — tense consistency, (sometimes you skip between past and present.), also some basic mistakes which can be corrected by Grammarly. But, over time, this aspect will get better as you write more. Furthermore, the updating stability is really good. You can become an excellent writer once your grammar improves!