Let's start with writing quality. I can see the type of comedy and self awareness your going for and I absolutely love it. It plays in a similar fashion to konosuba which is a really funny story. I can't say much about the update stability since it's only 13 chapters in but waiting isn't really an issue for me. The story is fast paced and is executed relatively well. The character descriptions are very detailed, which I like. World background is very descriptive but can be a little confusing at times. Overall great comedic story and a good quick read if you like this type of genre and story.
WayneSteine
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LIKEgot some more advanced chaps, but still trying to clean them up of some useless chatters as I like getting straight to the point with required details enough to paint the picture but no so detailed where it just becomes descriptive narration instead of storytelling type if you get what I mean. As for the world background around 50 chapters in maybe, you'll see some signs. ;)