I love the way its written. Author has a way of immersing you into the story... Language is good. There is no grammatical errors. But can actually capitalise the 'I' in there... it doesn't make a diff but its just pleasing to eyes I guess.. Anyways keep up the good work. You have the ability to make people imagine exactly what you want them to.
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