Hi readers, this is the author... I hope you all can upvote this review so readers can read this review before posting their own... I saw many threads on Forum, Review comments on books... The fight over Authors deleting their Reviews so I will state my reason below when I will delete Review comments... I will use an exaple: We have four people being led into your house, the first person. Man #1: House is good! Now this is the spammers, they love their books and there is nothing to share if they think the five points are met to their criteria what else do they need to say? I mean the people don't even read always the best review first to begin with... Such Reviews I will leave it, because people calling it bots and stuff is simply unreasonable since I don't even know any of these people and each of them love the book so leave them be. Man #2: Veteran expert gives a full detailed explanation why the house is great. No need to say more right? The person gave a proper review so I will not even touch it. Man #3: Gives a low Rating... But he gives out FACTS and EVIDENCE why the review is bad to allow me to correct my house. I will accept it. BUT don't mistake FACTS and EVIDENCE just for what YOU want or the Author does NOT want to follow your wishes... I will leave the reviews alone, I mean they are my reminders to not make mistakes, however those that simply state they want the MC to just kill over small things I will delete them without hesitation Man #4: Similar as Man #1, Book is trash, MC is trash... Short sentences no explanation at all... I will delete them but leave #1, why? Because we are humans, 90% of the people first look for the lowest ratings to see why is the book bad but then they find Reviews with only single sentences the book is horrible, what is horrible? The Grammar? The Spelling? The World Development? The Release rate? Writing Quality? Character Design? Or perhaps the Story Development? Unlike the "Good Novel" that is automatically ignored, attention is pushed to these reviews causing readers to just go past not giving the Novel a try and judge for themselves... ------------------- **: The people saying to remove Reviews on both good and Bad that has little words are really unreasonable, what if there was someone very tired after work just want to give his favourite book a good rating but he is too tired to simply type? So this is a kind Warning before hand so people will know, I am not abusing the System since I already given a proper heads up ** #2: Gave myself 4 stars I think my book is good from my point of view, did not give it full score because I used this review as my evidence ahead of time when I take action Thanks for reading the book!

All Deleted Reviews will be posted here for everyone to see, how it will be received I will not care. I did not give myself full scores once again, because I was forced to make another review to deal with people who only read a few chapters and call it a day.

This is my honest review... I really don't know whether to like this novel or hate this novel.....If I really want to describe this novel then it is a mess. A complete mess. First of all the character design of MC is not likable. When he reincarnated in this world with fragment memories....he was not a bit vigilant which made me almost drop this novel and when he met his father who came for the reunion. The MC accepted him without any problems and went to live with him with koneko. This made me drop this novel....seriously bro..I know that you are new to writing but still at least make it believable. The MC does not even has his guard up against them as he does not have any memories in this cruel world. You know, even a person with amnesia in the real world have a hard time trusting even his/her mother and father as he doesn't remember if they are lying or not but the MC here starts trusting his so called family the moment he meets them who were not present when he had to go through that torture. So, after a month or so I didn't have any novels to read so I continued this novel again and after some 20 or so chapters, I dropped it again... The MC turns into a semi-beta which is frustrating...then the MC becomes 'I would do anything for my loved ones' which is annoying to hear because it is MC will make anyone he finds or sees for the first time his 'loved one' like his family members and all his peerage members. Many this in this novel are forceful.... Ok, the revies it too long so I am leaving it.....

This author, is the complete opposite of his name, no way in hell *pfft* is he a newbie. Honestly I am shocked that this is his first book the writing style is similar to a more experienced author, that has a few books under their belt. Also for those of you daoists who are grammar buffs who wail about it’s incorrect usage, you should find this story quite to your liking. Considering their usage of grammar so far is much better than, quite a few authors and mine. Only unknown so far is their updating abilities seeing how it’s just been released.

This novel makes it hard for me to like. The setting is well thought through and the mc's background is unique and interesting. I like that the MC is strong but has room to grow. However if you cannot get past a couple things then you will also find it hard to like this novel. 1. Illogical scenarios and character actions. 2. Repetative hypersexualized relationships among many children 10-13 y/o 3. Beta MC (repetitively abused by his peerage/love interests. I'm talking being punched in the face hard enough to fly into the wall while all the girls are smiling, including the MC) The illogical scenarios start from the beginning of the novel. The MC, even though being kidnapped as a child loosing his mother and being experimented on/tortured and then displaying a dissociative episodes(multiple personalities), has ZERO fear of others and is willing to trust them instantly. I think people seriously underestimate how debilitating disassociation is for people, especially in cases of severe trauma. It's a good backstory and it makes one feel for the MC but it just doesn't match with how he acts. The worst part is the multiple inner monolouge's where the MC explains how her is being both smart and careful when he is basically being an idiot who is manipulated by those around him. Just because you say someone is acting wise does not mean they actually are. Unfortunately it isn't just the MC. For some reason, everyone in this novel treats children like adults and there is almost no difference in how they speak or act. Yes, young children can be just as interested in love and sexual relationships, even if they don't fully understand it, but when every single chapter is about the MC flirting with his harem and the girls seducing him when he is 11 y/o is disturbing. Especially when this is not only encouraged by the surrounding adults but they even participate in 'grooming' them. The relationships are just way to rushed in every way. I want to like this novel more, but the inconsistencies in characters and the forced relationships combined with abuse of a dissociative kid is off putting, at least for me.

Allow this noob to give himself a noobish ratings.... I hope you all enjoy this book as much as I enjoy writing it, honestly sometimes I have to listen to some up beat music to pump my blood feeling excited to write... Sometimes I stare at the screen but then when I think of something everything blast out like I never had a writers block moment for like 20 minutes! hahahaahah, Well enough rambling of a noob such as me, I honestly hope you enjoy my book and thank you for the continued support

I think that this novel is probably going to be one of the best that I have read as long as you keep working on it and update more chapters ----------------------------------------------------------------------------

This is my second time dropping this book the only reason why picked it up again was because the author edited but so far everything is still the same especially the forced relationship between rias and issei and it is a clear as day that the author likes issei x rias simply cause the first time rias meets madara she calls him a pervert for having 2 female peerage members but all the things the mc does for rias she still sees him as a friend not even a best friend but as soon as issei comes in she's head over heels over him after the rating game between her and riser which the mc and his peerage helped train them even masaru got mad cause of the engagement between rias and riser which he told zeoctis and the head of the phenex he would cut all belial ties between them and yet rias still falls in love with issei and all issei did was the exact same thing as he did in the show which was trade his arm to hold a cross and holy water now if that Isn't forced I don't know what is.

Chapter each day is good... The author appears to explore the devil world slowly which is quite well done... Character interactions is okay but could improve... as for spelling and grammar that too could improve but then again it is quite good compared to some FF.... Anything else? Just like the book

Well it's good and different approach from other fanfics.. All the best and hope you give us a good fanfic👍