1, Character starts out way too OP for the world setting. 2, Even before his story has actually truly began. He already has the approval and peace of mind he has sought all his life after the introductionary chapters. 3, It goes for a rather tired simplistic hero-story design(it can work, but considering the introduction - That chances of it working out are slim to none. 4, The story messes HEAVILY with the very story basis for story it is based on. It 'seems great' so far, but I do not see this story panning out in the long run... Credits to the author tho, the author knows how start off by garnering the readers sympathy to immerse them in the story. But like I said, pretty much fullfilling all the dreams of his MC from the get go, kinda takes away the *******. Not just for the readers, but more problematically for the MC. It creates a void that once again has to filled(not saying it can't, not at all. But it sets a very high bar). The slow updates do speak towards the author ripping out his hair in frustration over this issue aswell.
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