Review Detail of HermitFromMtTai in I'm the King Of Technology

This review is not for readers but for the author. This novel is for new readers who like OP things. I have developed my own taste and this novel doesn't suit me. My initial expectations were high, but as I read through it, it fails me. The author here is, I'll term it "new", I get it he/she is a student. The novel is a world building dream fantasy of the author for me. there're many things to nitpick here. The writing quality and logic here is "ok and bad". I'll start with my thoughts reading through this novel. first chapters, system is a complete cheat tool, plot armor is really high. the story is/feels like the whole plot armor. sytems heals MC and makes him strong. MC profession is completely irrelevant. I don't know how did the MC mastered the knowledge he got. story makes him like a veteran hero just by some experience of two years. love development sucks, author slaps a pretty caring girl and calls it a day. characters feels like lifeless. the author does not excel in Expression and explanations. Never heard a king of an empire, there are other words used in here wrong. etc.... this seems to be a hate comment, but I couldn't really think of something to praise on. here are some world building novels that I may recommend for the author/readers to read. -Tales of the reincarnated lord. why did it finished early!!! -Hail the king. early part -The World Online. love this one -Amber sword, sad it's not updating. -release that witch. not my taste but still good.