Review Detail of PrinceofLightning in Blood Type: Dragon

Thanks for reviewing my story and it is now my turn to review yours. The story is awesome. The title is enough to get your blood boiling. The beginning kind of reminded me of my unbelievable expectations of the world I had in my childhood. Sometimes you comment that you lack good English but I think it is very good. (At least better than mine.) I am sorry that I have to say something negative but you take a little bit too much time to complete an incident.