Author I really like your novel, but i hope you can improve the grammar and words that was used. I notice that you keep using words that May sound similar to the right word but have very different meaning. Like instead of the word absorb, you keep using the word observe. I suggest you to ask a friend whose very well verse in english act as your editor.
Zeruna
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