Review Detail of MrIIIo in My Journey of Hunter x Hunter
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so the chapters are barely 200 words long and one chapter was even written like this: - he kills them - gets rewarded - goes home to sleep - wakes up and get's assassinated etc. like tf are you even doing author that's just a summarization. and while he says it gets better this stuff ain't readable. if you want people to actually read your story you should re write the first few chapters cus this just discourages people from continuing
My Journey of Hunter x Hunter
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Thank you for reviewing this story even if its barely readable. I also don't know how I even got people to read this when I just wrote whatever came to mind and did not have a clear plot or character. First 12 chapters were written like 5 years ago when I was an inexperienced writer and I uploaded it here from another writing platform, it got reads but I didn't think to even change my writing or proofread it. Anyway, I agree with you that it's not the best of my stories (probably the worst) however, I am trying to redeem myself with writing a better plot and story of this fanfic. Hope you'll be able to read it when it publishes. (All current chapters will be deleted). [img=recommend]
King_Of_SpaceTime:tbh I made something 1000x worse and it still got about 1k readers per Chap