Review Detail of 2charlie2 in Kalar´s Continent
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a good well-written story, with good pacing. it moves forward without trying to explain everything in detail, makng it feel like a story worth reading, instead of being full of filler material. Sometimes the story makes light of interpersonal connections, (like how his grandfather feels towards him after living together for a year, or the enchanter figure. how was his first impressions of the boy?) howerver i cannot deduct anything as i like the style and pacing to much.
Kalar´s Continent
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Thank you for your feedback and your amazing review! I noticed as well, that I took interpersonal relationships and character development much too lightly in the beginning so I took steps to slowly correct it from around chapter 25. Between 30 and 35 I started planning out the story for the long term, establishing a timeline, making a map, planning character development in depth. I spent a long time, discussing all the ideas and possibilities with friends and putting the story on the right tracks, I wonder if you have noticed? I have a few ideas in the making to fix some of the mistakes that I made along the way, as well as some side stories that would fit nicely in between existing chapters. It will further develop in the future but with limits of course. It would be interesting to know though, if someone noticed significant improvements between chapter 30 and 40 ^^