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Slacott3
Slacott3Lv135yr
2019-12-24 12:03

Come back dude ... cosmetic surgery and I really do have a question??so to be able but it was never a little more like a warrior of the old

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Truthfully, I don't understand why this novel is so highly rated, it's grammar and spelling is around the average of this website readable but at some points truly pulling you out of the immersion ny good read should have. However this is not my fault with this novel my fault is the Gary Stu-ness of this novel, now personally I don't mind opmcs nor do I asspulls later explained what I do have a problem with is bs, now don't take this the wrong way I personally believe trying to build upon source material is a fan fictions greatest strength as long as it doesn't conflict with the author without good reason, but this guy essentially says "Yeah you know that really cool hunter the queen relied on to kill Snow White? Yeah well my guy is the leader of the cooler version of those guys". Do you get what I mean? That's like what kind of tings you'd come up with when you were 7 and trying to outcool your rival. But beyond all of this comes another of my main annoyances the lack of care for the source material. Snow White is set in 1500s Germany, this rant is not about them not speaking German or some thing of the sort, my personal distaste is at how not only was his father a god damned farmer who turned into a noble apparently his modern day etiquette is that of royalty, 1. A farmer even if he owned land would almost never become a member of nobility and if they ever did long standing noble factions would either subtly policitly or economically destroy them or have them become apart of their faction, beyond this point even if his father was a duke what kinda bs do you pull to become second only to the general within 20 years, he doesn't even have enough experience to be a high officer let alone second to only the fucking general, I digress that was not a point I intended to make, 2. Boy half the fucking things thought of disrespectful at the dinner table today were considered the thing to do and vice versa let alone it being Germany and our mc sounding like he comes from an English speaking country even nowadays it's like that let alone 500+ years ago. And it with this cause I give this novel a: Writing Quality: 2.5 Stability of updates: 3.5 Story development: 2 Character design: 1.5 World background: 0.5

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