Review Detail of Democratis in 《Infinite Stamina》

I genuinely can't read this anymore XD. Its got a great concept and the jokes are funny, but the grammar is killing me (sometimes its still funny but I can feel the contamination of bad English spreading throughout my chromosomes). Narrator/Author talks like Yoda bur every once in a while we will get some gibberish to lighten it up. Please Author - use grammarly or get a editor/beta reader cuz this grammar is a serial killer.