Review Detail of 23dark in The word Change

Hi, Here is the translation of the first chapter. but I have to warn you, my level of English is very low and I have been told that I can destroy nations with it. https://m.webnovel.com/book/15379677506224205

Sorry I can't find the chapter in English :/ It was a really good book in English I just can't read it in another language haha well if you continue to write it in your native language it's alright I won't be able to read it because I'm literally unable to do so your English will get better with more you practice just give it a shot