Review Detail of CherShootX in Magical Cosmic

Hi there, Here I'm back with my shameless review for my own work. This novel is my second creation, I would say. So it should be better that my previous one. As usual I will still be making a Sci-Fi vs Fantasy setting. Kingdom Building will be happening later on. I know that the prologue might be a bit info dump but it was needed later on. Of course, I will still try to improve more than ever before.