Review Detail of WWFire in Little Girl's Wild Side

All right, I'm here to give you some tips after what you say in the forum. First of all, if you want to upload chapters, do so in moderation. I can see that you uploaded more than five chapters a day on average, that's not ideal to gain popularity, especially for a chance to get featured at the "Daily Updates" section. From what I have gathered, it is best to upload the first two to four chapters at once, then upload two chapters a day until it you have 15-20 chapters in. After that, just upload once everyday consistently. Based on my (and others') experience, you will have a greater chance to be featured by chapter 30 this way. Currently, this genre of realistic contemporary romance is not on trend here. You may want to switch for another genre if you want to write again in the future. It doesn't have to be CEOs, you can go for fantasy romance or magical realism too (a girl with unique power, for example). Now, let's go for the technical issues in your writing. You have a bad habit of writing in monotone, thus become "choppy": when you write a paragraph, you often start with the same word for every sentence in it. For example: She.... She.... She.... After she... While she... Even though we, as readers, can understand the story, this may be a source of irritation for many others. Another bad habit you have is writing triple question marks. Why would you do that, when one is enough? Once again, this is tiny neglect that may irritate readers. Ah, yes. Title! you need an interesting title for the chapters to keep the readers intrigued! Last but not least... Congratulations author, for completing your book. You are one of the few, if not the only one I have ever seen writing their book until the end even with few or no fans supporting you. I really applaud your commitment. If you want to seek inspiration, I do recommend you to join the inkstone discord server. You can meet me and many others, from bottom to the top ranking there. :)