Review Detail of Loyalscum in Little Girl's Wild Side

I will be honest i dont like romance novels at all usually its like dousing me in holy water but, yours was different. Your story was very smooth and easy to read, i had a bit of trouble stoping because for once romance was not completely boring. Your description of world and characters was great small error is your punctuations. Some words did not match the sentence like you were trying to write did but wrote do instead. Besides that is a hidden gem.