Interesting Premise. Promising Story. With a little more work, it might be even more interesting and worthy of greatness. I wish there were more chapters, quicker release, but I know how hard it is to keep up with that and how quick one can burn out. I wish you luck, fellow author. Here's a 5/5 for your effort.
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