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2020-08-31 00:48

Dude, what the ****! You sick or something? Come on. You wanted to male a dark fanfiction but you ended up with an edgy one. A tip : it would have been effective if the actual Main Character of your fanfiction is doing the deed not the slaves. You didn't do this makes him an actual pussy. I'm disappointed you even dared to make his face look like Gilgamesh. This is a disgrace.

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