Review Detail of CCmei in The Wrath of the Dragon Empress

I see this story has basically been hiatus/left but hey I promised a review. It's only 8 chapters so it's really hard to judge as it's quite early however the writing it detailed and the grammar better than most of the offerings on this site. It's not perfect or anything but I have no complaints outside the occasional awkward dialogue. More than that it's the plain description I would have a problem with? Sure it describes things but like 'the sky is blue' kind of things. The story start exciting with a grand fight, a great bang of a prologue- the Prequal to the mc's birth and set up to the modern times life. I'd support a good cultivation novel, I see what could be done, Obviously it's just too early to bear fruit.