Review Detail of Sweet_Patagonias in The CEO's Lovely Wife

The beginning of the book is good and progresses nicely, but as the story continues the author drags out the plot, gives too many descriptions without actually moving the story forward, and makes the story come to a kind of stand still. However the author is open to criticism and has made amazing improvements in the plot and progression of the story in the later chapters. The story is starting to pick up steam and I am excited to see what happens next as the author continues to improve in their writing.